Okay shock and horror first. Explanation down below.






I'm finally posting my Isola pages. Why? Because I'm not continuing this way anymore.
WAIT DONT PANIC. I'M NOT QUITTING. But can you see? How bad this is? I know promised that I wouldn't redraw these pages and start over. But come on, this is awful. Even I can't stand it.
I knew from the start I wasn't going about this the right way. No thumbnails, not enough concepts, I only had a script and a few character designs. And all this was done on the computer when I know, I myself feel limited when I draw straight from the tablet. My drawings are more charming on paper, I feel more comfortable. I'm not obligated to rush through like I've done here (as well as Get a Clue). Isola is a very special story (aren't they all? lol) and I can't see it go down like this. I can't cheat myself on background and coloring, because the world of Isola is very cultural and vibrant. I did research to get enough inspiration, should I not follow through with the rest?
I'm personally glad I saw this within myself. I opened up the folder and couldn't believe I thought I was doing a good job somewhat. So once again, I'm not quitting. Yes, I'm starting over even when I said I would not. But I'm capable of better. I realize that not only could I improve on the art, but I need to practice making comic pages as well. There are many changes I'd like to make. I don't like how I'm letting the art run off the pages so much. Paneling practice will do wonders.
So in the meantime, I will continue to work through the concepts of this story. Dig deep into the world of Isola and explore the personality of the characters more. Annie needs more fleshing, especially if she's the star. I really don't want her to be a Maggy clone. This is a personal journey for me and I'd like to welcome you guys along. This will also prompt me to make a decent concept portfolio and even perhaps I'll get to print a book like I want to. All in all, this story is not done.
But I have so much work to do. Right now, I'm going to start fleshing out my characters again, since it's the most fun part to me. :D I'm pretty excited.